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Black Beetle
Boon Username: Sonic Character Name: Unknown Character Alias: Beetle Character Identity: Secret Age: Unknown Allignment: Chaotic Evil Affiliation: Injustice League Occupation: Villain Level: LvL Two BACKSTORY: Upgrade - before being known as Upgrade was a young teenager who happened to be bonded with the Red Beetle Scarab - Upgrade attempted to become a hero until one day he snapped, The scarab took control over his body and for many years he wreaked havoc across low cities and areas - before arriving at Metropolis - where he started his carnage there - he stands at a hulking height with bright red glowing eyes - which allow him to strike fear into his opponents sometimes without trying. - As soon as he started his villainous path he switched from 'Upgrade' to 'Beetle' Powers and Abilities: Red Beetle Scarab: Otherwise known as Khaji Da is an alien technology and artificial intelligence also created by the Reach which is indeed very similar to the blue scarab. After the descent of the blue scarab, they released this in hope that should the blue one fail, this would act as a back up. Like the blue, the scarab is technology. It's artificial intelligence has given it a malicious or rather "evil" personality that often contrasts greatly with its host, this was demonstrated the day it lodged itself onto Ted, thus officially making him its host. Upon becoming the host of the Scarab, Upgrade had found he shared thoughts and emotions to the Scarab. When it speaks to him in his mind, no one else but him can hear it, though unlike Upgrade, the scarab seems naturally prone to extreme violence and constantly suggests that Upgrade takes major offensive action against even the smallest of problems, and will sometimes try to do so without his control. The scarab can also 'flip out' on Upgrade - causing him to lose control of his anger.Red Beetle Armor which is durability enough to fend of 6 tons of force in response to Upgrade's thoughts or when the Scarab deems it necessary. The Red Beetle Armor also allows for Enhanced Healing and the ability to run up to 200 MPH
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Sonic- Posts : 17
Join date : 2018-12-21
Re: Black Beetle
Stop/commit a crime (other rpers must be present and involved) (COMPLETED 21/12/18)
Attend 1 "happening" (side mission event) (COMPLETED 22/12/18)
Attend 1 storyline event (COMPLETED 21/12/18)
Meet a level 3 hero or villain (COMPLETED 21/12/18)
LEVEL 2 CHECKLIST
Attend 2 "happenings"
Attend 2 storyline events
Fight a level 3 or 4 villain and survive
Stop/commit 4 crimes (other rpers must be present and involved)
Attend a social event
LEVEL 3 CHECKLIST
Attend 3 "happenings" (1 must be catastrophe level)
Attend 3 story line events
Defeat or apprehend 4 lower level villains
Attend 3 social events
Stop or commit 7 crimes (other rpers must be involved)
Attend 1 "happening" (side mission event) (COMPLETED 22/12/18)
Attend 1 storyline event (COMPLETED 21/12/18)
Meet a level 3 hero or villain (COMPLETED 21/12/18)
LEVEL 2 CHECKLIST
Attend 2 "happenings"
Attend 2 storyline events
Fight a level 3 or 4 villain and survive
Stop/commit 4 crimes (other rpers must be present and involved)
Attend a social event
LEVEL 3 CHECKLIST
Attend 3 "happenings" (1 must be catastrophe level)
Attend 3 story line events
Defeat or apprehend 4 lower level villains
Attend 3 social events
Stop or commit 7 crimes (other rpers must be involved)
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Sonic- Posts : 17
Join date : 2018-12-21
Re: Black Beetle
You didnt attend a side mission cause a side mission event hasnt been scheduled yet. Change that and add a distance for your blaster then ill accept
Re: Black Beetle
"Armour Reconfiguration: The armor can reconfigure itself to create a wide array of red tools and weapons, including an energy cannon, a sword and shield, a grappling hook, an energy blaster, claws, wings, and a set of large powered blades attached to the hands, over a foot in length, that can shear through tree trunks. The constructs or tools formed by the scarab are capable of withstanding damage of up to 2 ton of force, depending on the contruct itself (e.i: Shield). Additionally, weapons made are also quite very powerful, being able to cut or blast through most things. Teddy can shoot energy up to a mile. "
You should not be able to shoot energy up to a mile. Please lower that to 500 feet.
"Wings: The suit can sprout translucent wings, enabling him to fly, but they do not flap like real wings; instead they stay in one place. They can also double as shields, should the need arise. When the wings are formed, the suit also forms additional jet-boosters which allows Ted to reach speeds up to 100mph while in flight."
What level is this?
"Scarab Sight: The Scarab can scan the people Upgrade encounters, informing him of any major physical conditions (such as pregnancy). It can identify and scan metahumans. It can identify related to those it's already encountered via genetic analysis. The Scarab is able to identify thought-patterns, enabling it to see if something is sentient. It can identify matching energy signatures, letting it see if the energy patterns were developed from the same basis. It can also see extra-dimensional objects. It is continually aware of the electricity in the surrounding environment. It can also perceive magic, see how a magical effect can be dispelled, and see through a magical concealment. The Scarab's scan can cover at least a five mile square. It communicates the information it gleans into Ted in a manner he can understand."
This is too powerful with the amount of things you have. You shouldn't be able to perceive magic and how to dispel it fully at this level. Nor should it be a 5 square mile radius, make it a mile radius. Furthermore you shouldn't be able to see extra-dimensional objects with this. You can develop this all later.
"Antagonist Adaptation: The armor can tailor its blasts for use against specific opponents (e.g., Kryptonite radiation against a Kryptonian, suppression blast against a mob). The blasts can penetrate a Green Lantern ring's shield. The armor can call up anti-magic effects against magical opponents. By the Scarab's own estimation, it can even develop countermeasures that can take on the Spectre."
You aren't making kryptonite radiation or anti-magic effects with this. Nor will you be able to develop countermeasures for the fucking spectre. Remove that stuff. I know it may say you can on the wikia but you have to remember your character is not on the level of the actually scarab. You can develop this at a later date.
You should not be able to shoot energy up to a mile. Please lower that to 500 feet.
"Wings: The suit can sprout translucent wings, enabling him to fly, but they do not flap like real wings; instead they stay in one place. They can also double as shields, should the need arise. When the wings are formed, the suit also forms additional jet-boosters which allows Ted to reach speeds up to 100mph while in flight."
What level is this?
"Scarab Sight: The Scarab can scan the people Upgrade encounters, informing him of any major physical conditions (such as pregnancy). It can identify and scan metahumans. It can identify related to those it's already encountered via genetic analysis. The Scarab is able to identify thought-patterns, enabling it to see if something is sentient. It can identify matching energy signatures, letting it see if the energy patterns were developed from the same basis. It can also see extra-dimensional objects. It is continually aware of the electricity in the surrounding environment. It can also perceive magic, see how a magical effect can be dispelled, and see through a magical concealment. The Scarab's scan can cover at least a five mile square. It communicates the information it gleans into Ted in a manner he can understand."
This is too powerful with the amount of things you have. You shouldn't be able to perceive magic and how to dispel it fully at this level. Nor should it be a 5 square mile radius, make it a mile radius. Furthermore you shouldn't be able to see extra-dimensional objects with this. You can develop this all later.
"Antagonist Adaptation: The armor can tailor its blasts for use against specific opponents (e.g., Kryptonite radiation against a Kryptonian, suppression blast against a mob). The blasts can penetrate a Green Lantern ring's shield. The armor can call up anti-magic effects against magical opponents. By the Scarab's own estimation, it can even develop countermeasures that can take on the Spectre."
You aren't making kryptonite radiation or anti-magic effects with this. Nor will you be able to develop countermeasures for the fucking spectre. Remove that stuff. I know it may say you can on the wikia but you have to remember your character is not on the level of the actually scarab. You can develop this at a later date.
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Join date : 2018-12-22
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