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Post by Luka Sun Dec 23, 2018 7:08 am


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— Boon Username: Arcadital.
— Character Full-name: Kor-Al.
— Character Age: Unknown.
— Character Alias: None.
— Identity: Public.
— Alignment: Lawful Evil.
— Affiliation: Injustice League.
— Occupation: None.
— Level: Level One.


KRYPTONIAN PHYSIOLOGY (LEVEL I): He's Kryptonian.
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[*]Solar Radiation Absorption: His powers come from the sun.

  • Strength: He can carry three tons.

  • Durability: He can withstand three tons.

  • Flight: He can fly 75 miles per hour.

  • Heat Vision: Shoots a laser.

    • Super Vision: Good vision.





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Post by Luka Sun Dec 23, 2018 7:32 am

LEVEL 1 CHECKLIST
Stop/commit a crime with other roleplayers. (1/1)
murder (x - π)

Attend a side mission event/"happening". (1/1)
killer kornfields kans.

Attend a storyline event. (1/1)
aquaman attack

Meet a Level 3 Hero or Villain. (1/1)
red lantern


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Post by Admin Sun Dec 23, 2018 10:41 am

Bring your flight speed down to 75mph and youre good

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Post by Cryotonix Mon Dec 24, 2018 1:45 pm

Way too many apps. Strength and Durability are counted as one app, Flight is another, Healing is another, Super-Breath is another, Heat Vision is another, and Super Vision is another.

Bring this file down to three apps.

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Post by Cryotonix Mon Dec 24, 2018 2:04 pm

Rewrite this file. I don't tolerate straight C+P's from the wikia

http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Kryptonians#Powers_and_Abilities

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Post by Admin Wed Dec 26, 2018 2:54 pm

add a distance for your heat vision and add a distance for your "super vision"

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